Dear reader I think I have my first case of writer’s block, I have 4 full pages done and I feel personally like I have added everything that fits and feels right to me storyline wise for chapter 1 and I am ready to start chapter 2 by introducing my 2nd main character(Not counting “James” my ghost character) “Kristopher Dempsey”.

I gave him a bit of an introduction at the very end of the chapter(Yes I will post it in the “Georgia’s story” tab of my blog for you to read soon dear reader, I have been having an issue with that category being glitchy for some odd reason which is frustrating me) My plan for the start of chapter 2 is to have him in his squad-car driving out to the scene of the murder(where Georgia is waiting) and have him use the time to give a bit of hello to the reader then have him see Georgia fall(she passes out due to the fact that she is having a vision) and kind of bring it full-circle back to where I left off in chapter 1.

I am frustrated because I know that I really want the scene to start in the car(for some odd reason that I am not even fully sure of myself) but I don’t currently know how to make it sound how I want, more precisely how to phase the first few lines of his intro.

My friend Ron who is basically my editor says he will fix any major issues and help my character sound more like an actual guy.

I personally hate books where to me it’s obvious that a female wrote the story because the dialogue just is so un-guy like and I am deathly afraid of this happening to me as well, however I know it won’t happen to me because Ron is editing it and he is awesome.

I know I will get passed this I just need to relax for a bit and come back to it.

Thanks for being there for me Dear reader without you to vent to I would honestly probably be insane.